After the feeedback that me and karis recieved about our previous treatment,we then decided that we should move on to produce a new treatment with a completly new idea.
We have accomplsihed dicussing our opinions during the weekend using facebook.We used facebook as a benefit to share our ideas and actually present our made up treatments in which we both improved.
The images below present print screens of the communication of me and karis on facebook.
(Print screen insert)
Karis managed to produce a treatment ,in which she had sent me about a young boy who has a dream of becoming the best football player,it then presents the intention where the boy has an eating disorder.The print screen presents karis's treeatment however,in my own spare time i have made a few changes in whihc i believe seemed very interesting. (print screen)
Treatment
Sam is a 13 year old boy who lives a normal life and appears to be happy and healthy. However, as the film progresses we see he is put under a lot of pressure to be perfect in different aspects of his life, such as being the best football player in the world, he is considered to be a show off in which annoys everyone in their inner self, from every polite comments their Colleague appears a word in which they say in their own thought (harsh words appearing).He becomes noticeably more stressed and irritable as the film reaches its end – at which point the viewer would probably put his behaviour down to being a typical teenager. The twist in the end of the plot would be that Sam comes home and as soon he is about to take a sip of his soup, he has a sudden flashback in which presents him vomiting and munching down food continuously. After the flashback presents him about to open a container in which says speed considering that he takes drugs in order to accomplish his football dream.
We have accomplsihed dicussing our opinions during the weekend using facebook.We used facebook as a benefit to share our ideas and actually present our made up treatments in which we both improved.
The images below present print screens of the communication of me and karis on facebook.
(Print screen insert)
Karis managed to produce a treatment ,in which she had sent me about a young boy who has a dream of becoming the best football player,it then presents the intention where the boy has an eating disorder.The print screen presents karis's treeatment however,in my own spare time i have made a few changes in whihc i believe seemed very interesting. (print screen)
Treatment
Sam is a 13 year old boy who lives a normal life and appears to be happy and healthy. However, as the film progresses we see he is put under a lot of pressure to be perfect in different aspects of his life, such as being the best football player in the world, he is considered to be a show off in which annoys everyone in their inner self, from every polite comments their Colleague appears a word in which they say in their own thought (harsh words appearing).He becomes noticeably more stressed and irritable as the film reaches its end – at which point the viewer would probably put his behaviour down to being a typical teenager. The twist in the end of the plot would be that Sam comes home and as soon he is about to take a sip of his soup, he has a sudden flashback in which presents him vomiting and munching down food continuously. After the flashback presents him about to open a container in which says speed considering that he takes drugs in order to accomplish his football dream.
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