After developing my story ideas with my partner karis, we then further proceeded to the next step of our idea development and began to summarise our film.
Our story idea is about a girl who is young,idependent,bizare and also a victim of being bullied at school.She is considered to be weird because she uses a chatterbox to decide what she does in her social life.The story begins with a voice over explaining her background image presenting her as very lonley and also very thoughtful.As she constanly uses the chatterbox by listing the things that comes to her mind ,she allows the chatterbox to randomise her own decision for her.As we know she gets bullied at school everytime she makes the chatterbox to provide a decision for her.Therefore the chatterbox provides a decision to confront the bully to overcome her shyness and also to accomplish being very confident and true to her innerself.
The story types that our intial ideas belong to is the rites of passage Rob reneir like of a story in which a character recongnises their next age of their life and attempts to learn what they need to know and also accomplish their weakness.
Feedback
I have manage to recieve various of feedback from a collegue to ask some questiopns about my story idea and also to confirm their interest about my story idea.They asked me of what type of story would it reffer to as i explained above it belongs to the rites of passage.Apart from that the story seemed very interesting because of the way the chatterbox is something new that is used to present someones character as being awkward and weird.I also explained to the collegue of how i would visiualise my film and also what type of editing i would use,therefore i showed an advert that provided me a suitable idea of how i would consider my film to look.
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