Wednesday, 11 July 2012

Joyride story structure

Joyride

Act 1 set up:

Technician: a very lazy, unorganised character who is not bothered of his workstation but has the determination to keep promises.

Thugs: Very clever, vicious, aggressive and also very brave of committing anything in their lives

Policeman 1: Very brave and cooperative

Policewomen: very brave and cooperative with policeman 1

Police man 2: Very polite and determined to do his duty.


The beginning of act begins where the technician comes across a dead body in the middle of a rainforest at night on the road.


Act 2 Confrontations:

  1. The technician gets a call from colleague which explains that the power fault is not major in which he makes a excuse to leave because of a date
  2. he changes his shirt and drives until he sees a dead body
  3. The dead body turned around until the technician was knocked out and then thug number 2 knocks him down
  4. The technician is tied up and put at the back of the trunk
  5. he wakes up and manages to kick off the torch of the rear but he gives up trying
  6. the car is noticed by two police officers and manages to stop them
  7. as the two police officer comes out of the car same goes with the two thugs. The technician hears the radio and screams help
  8. The policeman realises that there is a man in the trunk and becomes shocked
  9. We see the reaction of the technician in the back of the car as he hears the policeman and women being killed and the thugs threatened him that he will be next
  10. The technician then tries to escape as the car drives off and another policeman then noticed the vehicle and chases them
  11. the technician attempts to escape but as he is trying the policeman bumps into the car and the technician sees a sparkle which produces a flame
  12. As the car is being bumped the technician is being poured by gasoline and he then sees the flame from the electric panel of the rear lights
  13. The two thugs crashes into a tree in which the technician manages to scap out of the car and then sees the policeman
  14. the hug then grabs hold of the technician but he then head buts him and becomes free
  15. The policeman ensures that he is safe as the thugs are captured until the technician sees the control panel from the beginning and begins to joke about the situation earlier
  16. As the technician looks up there is a crackle and a shower of sparks and then presents a black screen with a sudden sound of combustion.



Act 3: Resolution-This is where act two begins to finish and presents the change of the character development at the end of the story

The policeman: Should confirm more security on the specific area in the future and make warnings to other about the crime scene that took place. Also make sure the victim is safe in the car.

The technician: He may of become hurt or killed either way this should send a message to other technician that they must complete their workstation in order to reduce any risks. Also the technician shouldn’t of become very bigheaded as though he felt nothing had happened at all.

The thugs: sent in prison and learns to never commit a horrible crime again

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