Sunday, 7 October 2012

Script First draft 07/10/12


EXT. SCHOOL FIELD - DAY 


4 young girls (Kat, Olivia, Girl 1 and Girl 2) sit amongst trees passing around a bottle of vodka, all wear school uniform. All the girls are intermittently talking and laughing.

A male figure in the near distance begins to approach them

Girl 1 squints at the figure, then identifies him

GIRL 1 

Oh great, here comes Mr Perfect-Prefect, Sam 

 

GIRL 2 

Oi Sam, you gonna tell on us then? 

 

All the girls laugh

 

Kat begins to stumble and wobble, then passes out

 

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INT. CLASSROOM - DAY

 

Kat wakes up and looks over at Olivia who is sat at the next desk

 

OLIVIA

Good you’re finally up. I have no idea how we got here, but I'm pretty sure we're busted.

 

KAT

Me neither, but you're probably right

 

They both begin to laugh. 

 

Kat suddenly slowly stops laughing and her face becomes grave as she into stares space for a few seconds (as she does the sound of Olivia's laughter fades away, and the sound of screams fades in).

Kat turns to Olivia

 

KAT

Something doesn't feel right. Where are the others? I feel like something might have happened out there.

 

Kat gets up and walks to the door. She tries to open the door and finds that it is locked.

Olivia gets up and walks over to the windows. Both Kat and Olivia then try to open the windows, which they find are locked too.

They bang on the windows calling for help, but no one comes.

 

Both lean against a wall. They are breathing deeply as if they are beginning to panic.

 

The drinking scene in full is projected over them, where we see that Sam had pulled out a gun, took aim at the group and hit Kat and Olivia.

 

As they remember, both instinctively reach for the collars of their shirts, beneath which they both have bloody bullet wounds.

OLIVIA

(Murmuring) 

Oh my God

 

KAT

This is it. We're stuck here.


Both sink to the floor, their faces are blank with shock

 

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EXT. SCHOOL FIELD - DAY

 

Sam is frowning with concentration, hunched over a list of names labelled 'Naughty'. He crosses off Kat and Olivia from the list in red marker pen.

He smiles and reaches for his prefect badge. He strokes it.

 

SAM

(Whispering)

Almost perfect.

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